Style (1888)
by Walter Pater (1839-1894)
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¡́1 SINCE all progress of mind consists for the most part in differentiation, in
the resolution of an obscure and complex object into its component aspects, it
is surely the stupidest of losses to confuse things which right reason has put
asunder, to lose the sense of achieved distinctions, the distinction between
poetry and prose, for instance, or, to speak more exactly, between the laws and
characteristic excellences of verse and prose composition. ¡́2 On the other
hand, those who have dwelt most emphatically on the distinction between prose
and verse, prose and poetry, may sometimes have been tempted to limit the proper
functions of prose too narrowly ; and this again is at least false economy, as
being, in effect, the renunciation of a certain means or faculty, in a world
where after all we must needs make the most of things. ¡́3 Critical efforts to
limit art a priori , by anticipations regarding the natural incapacity of
the material with which this or that artist works, as the sculptor with solid
form, or the prose-writer with the {{Page 2}} ordinary language of men, are
always liable to be discredited by the facts of artistic production ; and while
prose is actually found to be a coloured thing with Bacon, picturesque with Livy
and Carlyle, musical with Cicero and Newman, mystical and intimate with Plato
and Michelet and Sir Thomas Browne, exalted or florid, it may be, with Milton
and Taylor, it will be useless to protest that it can be nothing at all, except
something very tamely and narrowly confined to mainly practical ends -- a kind
of "good round-hand ;" as useless as the protest that poetry might not
touch prosaic subjects as with Wordsworth, or an abstruse matter as with
Browning, or treat contemporary life nobly as with Tennyson. ¡́4 In
subordination to one essential beauty in all good literary style, in all
literature as a fine art, as there are many beauties of poetry so the beauties
of prose are many, and it is the business of criticism to estimate them as such
; as it is good in the criticism of verse to look for those hard, logical, and
quasiprosaic excellences which that too has, or needs. ¡́5 To find in the poem,
amid the flowers, the allusions, the mixed perspectives, of Lycidas for
instance, the thought, the logical structure : -- how wholesome! how delightful
! as to identify in prose what we call the poetry, the imaginative power, not
treating it as out of place and a kind of vagrant intruder, but by way of {{Page
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¡́6 Dryden, with the characteristic instinct of his age, loved to emphasise the
distinction between poetry and prose, the protest against their confusion with
each other, coming with somewhat diminished effect from one whose poetry was so
prosaic. ¡́7 In truth, his sense of prosaic excellence affected his verse rather
than his prose, which is not only fervid, richly figured, poetic, as we say, but
vitiated, all unconsciously, by many a scanning line. ¡́8 Setting up
correctness, that humble merit of prose, as the central literary excel1ence, he
is really a less correct writer than he may seem, still with an imperfect
mastery of the relative pronoun. ¡́9 It might have been foreseen that, in the
rotations of mind, the province of poetry in prose would find its assertor ;
and, a century after Dryden, amid very different intellectual needs, and with
the need therefore of great modifications in literary form, the range of the
poetic force in literature was effectively enlarged by Wordsworth. ¡́10 The true
distinction between prose and poetry he regarded as the almost technical or
accidental one of the absence or presence of metrical beauty, or, say ! metrical
restraint ; and for him the opposition came to be between verse and prose of
course ; but, as the essential dichotomy in this matter, between imaginative and
unimaginative {{Page 4}} writing, parallel to De Quincey's distinction between
"the literature of power and the literature of knowledge," in the
former of which the composer gives us not fact, but his peculiar sense of fact,
whether past or present.
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¡́11 Dismissing then, under sanction of Wordsworth, that harsher opposition of
poetry to prose, as savouring in fact of the arbitrary psychology of the last
century, and with it the prejudice that there can be but one only beauty of
prose style, I propose here to point out certain qualities of all literature as
a fine art, which, if they apply to the literature of fact, apply still more to
the literature of the imaginative sense of fact, while they apply indifferently
to verse and prose, so far as either is really imaginative -- certain conditions
of true art in both alike, which conditions may also contain in them the secret
of the proper discrimination and guardianship of the peculiar excellences of
either.
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¡́12 The line between fact and something quite different from external fact is,
indeed, hard to draw. ¡́13 In Pascal, for instance, in the persuasive writers
generally, how difficult to define the point where, from time to time, argument
which, if it is to be worth anything at all, must consist of facts or groups of
facts, becomes a pleading -- a theorem no longer, but essentially an appeal to
the reader to catch the {{Page 5}} writer's spirit, to think with him, if one
can or will -- an expression no longer of fact but of his sense of it, his
peculiar intuition of a world, prospective, or discerned below the faulty
conditions of the present, in either case changed somewhat from the actual
world. ¡́14 In science, on the other hand, in history so far as it conforms to
scientific rule, we have a literary domain where the imagination may be thought
to be always an intruder. ¡́15 And as, in all science, the functions of
literature reduce themselves eventually to the transcribing of fact, so all the
excellences of literary form in regard to science are reducible to various kinds
of painstaking ; this good quality being involved in all "skilled
work" whatever, in the drafting of an act of parliament, as in sewing. ¡́16
Yet here again, the writer's sence of fact, in history especially, and in all
those complex subjects which do but lie on the borders of science, will still
take the place of fact, in various degrees. ¡́17 Your historian, for instance,
with absolutely truthful intention, amid the multitude of facts presented to him
must needs select, and in selecting assert something of his own humour,
something that comes not of the world without but of a vision within. ¡́18 So
Gibbon moulds his unwieldy material to a preconceived view. ¡́19 Livy, Tacitus,
Michelet, moving full of poignant sensibility amid the records of the past,
each, after his own sense, modifies -- who can tell where {{Page 6}} and to what
degree ? -- and becomes something else than a transcriber ; each, as he thus
modifies, passing into the domain of art proper. ¡́20 For just in proportion as
the writer's aim, consciously or unconsciously, comes to be the transcribing,
not of the world, not of mere fact, but of his sense of it, he becomes an
artist, his work fine art ; and good art (as I hope ultimately to show)
in proportion to the truth of his presentment of that sense ; as in those
humbler or plainer functions of literature also, truth -- truth to bare fact,
there -- is the essence of such artistic quality as they may have. ¡́21 Truth !
there can be no merit, no craft at all, without that. ¡́22 And further, all
beauty is in the long run only fineness of truth, or what we call
expression, the finer accommodation of speech to that vision within.
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¡́23 -- The transcript of his sense of fact rather than the fact, as being
preferable, pleasanter, more beautiful to the writer himself. ¡́24 In
literature, as in every other product of human skill, in the moulding of a bell
or a platter for instance, wherever this sense asserts itself, wherever the
producer so modifies his work as, over and above its primary use or intention,
to make it pleasing (to himself, of course, in the first instance) there,
"fine" as opposed to merely serviceable art, exists. ¡́25 Literary
art, that is, like all art which is in any way imitative or reproductive of fact
-- form, or {{Page 7}} colour, or incident -- is the representation of such fact
as connected with soul, of a specific personality, in its preferences, its
volition and power.
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¡́26 Such is the matter of imaginative or artistic literature -- this
transcript, not of mere fact, but of fact in its infinite variety, as modified
by human preference in all its infinitely varied forms. ¡́27 It will be good
literary art not because it is brilliant or sober, or rich, or impulsive, or
severe, but just in proportion as its representation of that sense, that
soul-fact, is true, verse being only one department of such literature, and
imaginative prose, it may be thought, being the special art of the modern world.
¡́28 That imaginative prose should be the special and opportune art of the
modern world results from two important facts about the latter : first, the
chaotic variety and complexity of its interests, making the intellectual issue,
the really master currents of the present time incalculable -- a condition of
mind little susceptible of the restraint proper to verse form, so that the most
characteristic verse of the nineteenth century has been lawless verse ; and
secondly, an all-pervading naturalism, a curiosity about everything whatever as
it really is, involving a certain humility of attitude, cognate to what must,
after all, be the less ambitious form of literature. ¡́29 And prose thus
asserting itself as the special and privileged artistic {{Page 8}} faculty of
the present day, will be, however critics may try to narrow its scope, as varied
in its excellence as humanity itself reflecting on the facts of its latest
experience -- an instrument of many stops, meditative, observant, descriptive,
eloquent, analytic, plaintive, fervid. ¡́30 Its beauties will be not exclusively
"pedestrian ": it will exert, in due measure, all the varied charms of
poetry, down to the rhythm which, as in Cicero, or Michelet, or Newman, at their
best, gives its musical value to every syllable. *
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¡́31 The literary artist is of necessity a scholar, and in what he proposes to
do will have in mind, first of all, the scholar and the scholarly conscience --
the male conscience in this matter, as we must think it, under a system of
education which still to so large an extent limits real scholarship to men. ¡́32
In his self-criticism, he supposes always that sort of reader who will go (full
of eyes) warily, considerately, though without consideration for him, over the
ground which the female conscience traverses so lightly, so amiably.
*|Mr.| Saintsbury, in his Specimens of English Prose, from Malory to Macaulay, has succeeded in tracing, through successive English prose-writers, the tradition of that severer beauty in them, of which this admirable scholar of our literature is known to be a lover. English Prose, from Mandeville to Thackeray, more recently "chosen and edited " by a younger scholar, |Mr.| Arthur Galton, of New College, Oxford, a lover of our literature at once enthusiastic and discreet, aims at a more various illustration of the eloquent powers of English prose, and is a delightful companion.
{{Page 9}} ¡́33 For the material in which he works is no more a creation of his own than the sculptor's marble. ¡́34 Product of a myriad various minds and contending tongues, compact of obscure and minute association, language has its own abundant and often recondite laws, in the habitual and summary recognition of which scholarship consists. ¡́35 A writer, full of a matter he is before all things anxious to express, may think of those laws, the limitations of vocabulary, structure, and the like, as a restriction, but if a real artist will find in them an opportunity. ¡́36 His punctilious observance of the proprieties of his medium will diffuse through all he writes a general air of sensibility, of refined usage. ¡́37 Exclusiones debitæ naturæ -- the exclusions, or rejections, which nature demands -- we know how large a part these play, according to Bacon, in the science of nature. ¡́38 In a somewhat changed sense, we might say that the art of the scholar is summed up in the observance of those rejections demanded by the nature of his medium, the material he must use. ¡́39 Alive to the value of an atmosphere in which every term finds its utmost degree of expression, and with all the jealousy of a lover of words, he will resist a constant tendency on the part of the majority of those who use them to efface the distinctions of language, the facility of writers often reinforcing in this respect the work of {{Page 10}} the vulgar. ¡́40 He will feel the obligation not of the laws only, but of those affinities, avoidances, those mere preferences, of his language, which through the associations of literary history have become a part of its nature, prescribing the rejection of many a neology, many a license, many a gipsy phrase which might present itself as actually expressive. ¡́41 His appeal, again, is to the scholar, who has great experience in literature, and will show no favour to short-cuts, or hackneyed illustration, or an affectation of learning designed for the unlearned. ¡́42 Hence a contention, a sense of self-restraint and renunciation, having for the susceptible reader the effect of a challenge for minute consideration ; the attention of the writer, in every minutest detail, being a pledge that it is worth the reader's while to be attentive too, that the writer is dealing scrupulously with his instrument, and therefore, indirectly, with the reader himself also, that he has the science of the instrument he plays on, perhaps, after all, with a freedom which in such case will be the freedom of a master.
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¡́43 For meanwhile, braced only by those restraints, he is really vindicating
his liberty in the making of a vocabulary, an entire system of composition, for
himself, his own true manner ; and when we speak of the manner of a true master
we mean what is essential in his art. ¡́44 Pedantry being only the {{Page 11}}
scholarship of le cuistre (we have no English equivalent) he is no
pedant, and does but show his intelligence of the rules of language in his
freedoms with it, addition or expansion, which like the spontaneities of manner
in a well-bred person will still further illustrate good taste. -- The right
vocabulary ! ¡́45 Translators have not invariably seen how all-important that is
in the work of translation, driving for the most part at idiom or construction ;
whereas, if the original be first-rate, one's first care should be with its
elementary particles, Plato, for instance, being often reproducible by an exact
following, with no variation in structure, of word after word, as the pencil
follows a drawing under tracing-paper, so only each word or syllable be not of
false colour, to change my illustration a little.
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¡́46 Well ! that is because any writer worth translating at all has winnowed and
searched through his vocabulary, is conscious of the words he would select in
systematic reading of a dictionary, and still more of the words he would reject
were the dictionary other than Johnson's ; and doing this with his peculiar
sense of the world ever in view, in search of an instrument for the adequate
expression of that, he begets a vocabulary faithful to the colouring of his own
spirit, and in the strictest sense original. ¡́47 That living authority which
language needs lies, in truth, in its scholars, who {{Page 12}} recognising
always that every language possesses a genius, a very fastidious genius, of its
own, expand at once and purify its very elements, which must needs change along
with the changing thoughts of living people. ¡́48 Ninety years ago, for
instance, great mental force, certainly, was needed by Wordsworth, to break
through the consecrated poetic associations of a century, and speak the language
that was his, that was to become in a measure the language of the next
generation. ¡́49 But he did it with the tact of a scholar also. ¡́50 English,
for a quarter of a century past, has been assimilating the phraseology of
pictorial art ; for half a century, the phraseology of the great German
metaphysical movement of eighty years ago ; in part also the language of
mystical theology : and none but pedants will regret a great consequent increase
of its resources. ¡́51 For many years to come its enterprise may well lie in the
naturalisation of the vocabulary of science, so only it be under the eye of a
sensitive scholarship -- in a liberal naturalisation of the ideas of science
too, for after all the chief stimulus of good style is to possess a full, rich,
complex matter to grapple with. ¡́52 The literary artist, therefore, will be
well aware of physical science ; science also attaining, in its turn, its true
literary ideal. ¡́53 And then, as the scholar is nothing without the historic
sense, he will be apt to restore not really {{Page 13}} obsolete or really
worn-out words, but the finer edge of words still in use : ascertain,
communicate, discover -- words like these it has been part of our "
business " to misuse. ¡́54 And still, as language was made for man, he will
be no authority for correctnesses which, limiting freedom of utterance, were yet
but accidents in their origin ; as if one vowed not to say "its,"
which ought to have been in Shakespeare ; " his" and "hers,"
for inanimate objects, being but a barbarous and really inexpressive survival.
¡́55 Yet we have known many things like this. ¡́56 Racy Saxon monosyllables,
close to us as touch and sight, he will intermix readily with those long,
savoursome, Latin words, rich in "second intention." ¡́57 In this late
day certainly, no critical process can be conducted reasonably without
eclecticism. ¡́58 Of such eclecticism we have a justifying example in one of the
first poets of our time. ¡́59 How illustrative of monosyllabic effect, of
sonorous Latin, of the phraseology of science, of metaphysic, of colloquialism
even, are the writings of Tennyson ; yet with what a fine, fastidious
scholarship throughout !
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¡́60 A scholar writing for the scholarly, he will of course leave something to
the willing intelligence of his reader. ¡́61 " To go preach to the first
passer-by," says Montaigne, "to become tutor to the ignorance of the
first I meet, is a thing I abhor ; " a thing, in {{Page 14}} fact,
naturally distressing to the scholar, who will therefore ever be shy of offering
uncomplimentary assistance to the reader's wit. ¡́62 To really strenuous minds
there is a pleasurable stimulus in the challenge for a continuous effort on
their part, to be rewarded by securer and more intimate grasp of the author's
sense. ¡́63 Self-restraint, a skilful economy of means, asc¨ºsis , that
too has a beauty of its own ; and for the reader supposed there will be an
æsthetic satisfaction in that frugal closeness of style which makes the
most of a word, in the exaction from every sentence of a precise relief, in the
just spacing out of word to thought, in the logically filled space connected
always with the delightful sense of difficulty overcome.
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¡́64 Different classes of persons, at different times, make, of course, very
various demands upon literature. ¡́65 Still, scholars, I suppose, and not only
scholars, but all disinterested lovers of books, will always look to it, as to
all other fine art, for a refuge, a sort of cloistral refuge, from a certain
vulgarity in the actual world. ¡́66 A perfect poem like Lycidas, a
perfect fiction like Esmond, the perfect handling of a theory like
Newman's Idea of a University, has for them something of the uses of a
religious " retreat." ¡́67 Here, then, with a view to the central need
of a select few, those " men of a finer thread " who have formed and
{{Page 15}} maintain the literary ideal, everything, every component element,
will have undergone exact trial, and, above all, there will be no
uncharacteristic tar-nished or vulgar decoration, permissible ornament being for
the most part structural, or necessary. ¡́68 As the painter in his picture, so
the artist in his book, aims at the production by honourable artifice of a
peculiar atmosphere. ¡́69 " The artist," says Schiller, " may be
known rather by what he omits" ; and in literature, too, the true
artist may be best recognised by his tact of omission. ¡́70 For to the grave
reader words too are grave ; and the ornamental word, the figure, the accessory
form or colour or reference, is rarely content to die to thought precisely at
the right moment, but will inevitably linger awhile, stirring a long "
brain- wave " behind it of perhaps quite alien associations.
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¡́71 Just there, it may be, is the detrimental tendency of the sort of scholarly
attentiveness of mind I am recommending. ¡́72 But the true artist allows for it.
¡́73 He will remember that, as the very word ornament indicates what is in
itself non-essential, so the " one beauty " of all literary style is
of its very essence, and independent, in prose and verse alike, of all removable
decoration ; that it may exist in its fullest lustre, as in Flaubert's Madame
Bovary, for instance, or in Stendhal's Le Rouge et Le Noir, in a
composition utterly {{Page 16}} unadorned, with hardly a single suggestion of
visibly beautiful things. ¡́74 Parallel, allusion, the allusive way generally,
the flowers in the garden : -- he knows the narcotic force of these upon the
negligent intelligence to which any diversion, literally, is welcome, any
vagrant intruder, because one can go wandering away with it from the immediate
subject. ¡́75 Jealous, if he have a really quickening motive within, of all that
does not hold directly to that, of the facile, the otiose, he will never depart
from the strictly pedestrian process, unless he gains a ponderable something
thereby. ¡́76 Even assured of its congruity, he will still question its
serviceableness. ¡́77 Is it worth while, can we afford, to attend to just that,
to just that figure or literary reference, just then ? -- Surplusage ! he will
dread that, as the runner on his muscles. ¡́78 For in truth all art does but
consist in the removal of surplusage, from the last finish of the gem-engraver
blowing away the last particle of invisible dust, back to the earliest
divination of the finished work to be, lying somewhere, according to
Michelangelo's fancy, in the rough-hewn block of stone.
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¡́79 And what applies to figure or flower must be understood of all other
accidental or removable ornaments of writing whatever ; and not of specific
ornament only, but of all that latent colour and imagery which language as such
carries {{Page 17}} in it. ¡́80 A lover of words for their own sake, to whom
nothing about them is unimportant, a minute and constant observer of their
physiognomy, he will be on the alert not only for obviously mixed metaphors of
course, but for the metaphor that is mixed in all our speech, though a rapid use
may involve no cognition of it. ¡́81 Currently recognising the incident, the
colour, the physical elements or particles in words like absorb, consider,
extract, to take the first that occur, he will avail himself of them, as
further adding to the resources of expression. ¡́82 The elementary particles of
language will be realised as colour and light and shade through his scholarly
living in the full sense of them. ¡́83 Still opposing the constant degradation
of language by those who use it carelessly, he will not treat coloured glass as
if it were clear ; and while half the world is using figure unconsciously, will
be fully aware not only of all that latent figurative texture in speech, but of
the vague, lazy, half{\- }formed personification -- a rhetoric, depressing, and
worse than nothing, because it has no really rhetorical motive -- which plays so
large a part there, and, as in the case of more ostentatious ornament,
scrupulously exact of it, from syllable to syllable, its precise value.
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¡́84 So far I have been speaking of certain conditions of the literary art
arising out of the medium or {{Page 18}} material in or upon which it works, the
essential qualities of language and its aptitudes for contingent ornamentation,
matters which define scholarship as science and good taste respectively. ¡́85
They are both subservient to a more intimate quality of good style : more
intimate, as coming nearer to the artist himself. ¡́86 The otiose, the facile,
surplusage : why are these abhorrent to the true literary artist, except
because, in literary as in all other art, structure is all-important, felt, or
painfully missed, everywhere ? -- that architectural conception of work, which
foresees the end in the beginning and never loses sight of it, and in every part
is conscious of all the rest, till the last sentence does but, with undiminished
vigour, unfold and justify the first -- a condition of literary art, which, in
contradistinction to another quality of the artist himself, to be spoken of
later, I shall call the necessity of mind in style.
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¡́87 An acute philosophical writer, the late Dean Mansel (a writer whose works
illustrate the literary beauty there may be in closeness, and with obvious
repression or economy of a fine rhetorical gift) wrote a book, of fascinating
precision in a very obscure subject, to show that all the technical laws of
logic are but means of securing, in each and all of its apprehensions, the
unity, the strict identity with itself, of the apprehending mind. ¡́88 All the
laws of {{Page 19}} good writing aim at a similar unity or identity of the mind
in all the processes by which the word is associated to its import. ¡́89 The
term is right, and has its essential beauty, when it becomes, in a manner, what
it signifies, as with the names of simple sensations. ¡́90 To give the phrase,
the sentence, the structural member, the entire composition, song, or essay, a
similar unity with its subject and with itself : -- style is in the right way
when it tends towards that. ¡́91 All depends upon the original unity, the vital
wholeness and identity, of the initiatory apprehension or view. ¡́92 So much is
true of all art, which therefore requires always its logic, its comprehensive
reason -- insight, foresight, retrospect, in simultaneous action -- true, most
of all, of the literary art, as being of all the arts most closely cognate to
the abstract intelligence. ¡́93 Such logical coherency may be evidenced not
merely in the lines of composition as a whole, but in the choice of a single
word, while it by no means interferes with, but may even prescribe, much
variety, in the building of the sentence for instance, or in the manner,
argumentative, descriptive, discursive, of this or that part or member of the
entire design. ¡́94 The blithe, crisp sentence, decisive as a child's expression
of its needs, may alternate with the long-contending, victoriously intricate
sentence ; the sentence, born with the integrity of a single word, relieving the
{{Page 20}} sort of sentence in which, if you look closely, you can see much
contrivance, much adjustment, to bring a highly qualified matter into compass at
one view. ¡́95 For the literary architecture, if it is to be rich and
expressive, involves not only foresight of the end in the beginning, but also
development or growth of design, in the process of execution, with many
irregularities, surprises, and afterthoughts ; the contingent as well as the
necessary being subsumed under the unity of the whole. ¡́96 As truly, to the
lack of such architectural design, of a single, almost visual, image, vigorously
informing an entire, perhaps very intricate, composition, which shall be
austere, ornate, argumentative, fanciful, yet true from first to last to that
vision within, may be attributed those weaknesses of conscious or unconscious
repetition of word, phrase, motive, or member of the whole matter, indicating,
as Flaubert was aware, an original structure in thought not organically
complete. ¡́97 With such foresight, the actual conclusion will most often get
itself written out of hand, before, in the more obvious sense, the work is
finished. ¡́98 With some strong and leading sense of the world, the tight hold
of which secures true composition and not mere loose accretion, the
literary artist, I suppose, goes on considerately, setting joint to joint,
sustained by yet restraining the productive ardour, retracing the negligences of
his first sketch, {{Page 21}} repeating his steps only that he may give the
reader a sense of secure and restful progress, readjusting mere assonances even,
that they may soothe the reader, or at least not interrupt him on his way ; and
then, somewhere before the end comes, is burdened, inspired, with his
conclusion, and betimes delivered of it, leaving off, not in weariness and
because he finds himself at an end, but in all the freshness of volition.
¡́99 His work now structurally complete, with all the accumulating effect of
secondary shades of meaning, he finishes the whole up to the just proportion of
that ante-penultimate conclusion, and all becomes expressive. ¡́100 The house he
has built is rather a body he has informed. ¡́101 And so it happens, to its
greater credit, that the better interest even of a narrative to be recounted, a
story to be told, will often be in its second reading. ¡́102 And though there
are instances of great writers who have been no artists, an unconscious tact
sometimes directing work in which we may detect, very pleasurably, many of the
effects of conscious art, yet one of the greatest pleasures of really good prose
literature is in the critical tracing out of that conscious artistic structure,
and the pervading sense of it as we read. ¡́103 Yet of poetic literature too ;
for, in truth, the kind of constructive intelligence here supposed is one of the
forms of the imagination.
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¡́104 That is the special function of mind, in style. ¡́105 {{Page 22}} Mind and
soul : -- hard to ascertain philosophically, the distinction is real enough
practically, for they often interfere, are sometimes in conflict, with each
other. ¡́106 Blake, in the last century, is an instance of preponderating soul,
embarrassed, at a loss, in an era of preponderating mind. ¡́107 As a quality of
style, at all events, soul is a fact, in certain writers -- the way they have of
absorbing language, of attracting it into the peculiar spirit they are of, with
a subtlety which makes the actual result seem like some inexplicable
inspiration. ¡́108 By mind, the literary artist reaches us, through static and
objective indications of design in his work, legible to all. ¡́109 By soul, he
reaches us, somewhat capriciously perhaps, one and not another, through vagrant
sympathy and a kind of immediate contact. ¡́110 Mind we cannot choose but
approve where we recognise it ; soul may repel us, not because we misunderstand
it. ¡́111 The way in which theological interests sometimes avail themselves of
language is perhaps the best illustration of the force I mean to indicate
generally in literature, by the word soul. ¡́112 Ardent religious
persuasion may exist, may make its way, without finding any equivalent heat in
language : or, again, it may enkindle words to various degrees, and when it
really takes hold of them doubles its force. ¡́113 Religious history presents
many remarkable instances in which,through no mere phrase {{Page 23}} worship,
an unconscious literary tact has, for the sensitive, laid open a privileged
pathway from one to another. ¡́114 " The altar-fire," people say,
" has touched those lips ! " ¡́115 The Vulgate, the English Bible, the
English Prayer-Book, the writings of Swedenborg, the Tracts for the Times : --
there, we have instances of widely different and largely diffused phases of
religious feeling in operation as soul in style. ¡́116 But something of the same
kind acts with similar power in certain writers of quite other than theological
literature, on behalf of some wholly personal and peculiar sense of theirs. ¡́117
Most easily illustrated by theological literature, this quality lends to profane
writers a kind of religious influence. ¡́118 At their best, these writers
become, as we say sometimes, " prophets " ; such character depending
on the effect not merely of their matter, but of their matter as allied to, in
" electric affinity " with, peculiar form, and working in all cases by
an immediate sympathetic contact, on which account it is that it may be called
soul, as opposed to mind, in style. ¡́119 And this too is a faculty of choosing
and rejecting what is congruous or otherwise, with a drift towards unity --
unity of atmosphere here, as there of design -- soul securing colour (or
perfume, might we say ?) as mind secures form, the latter being essentially
finite, the former vague or infinite, as the influence of a living person {{Page
24}} is practically infinite. ¡́120 There are some to whom nothing has any real
interest, or real meaning, except as operative in a given person ; and it is
they who best appreciate the quality of soul in literary art. ¡́121 They seem to
know a person, in a book, and make way by intuition : yet, although they
thus enjoy the completeness of a personal information, it is still a
characteristic of soul, in this sense of the word, that it does but suggest what
can never be uttered, not as being different from, or more obscure than, what
actually gets said, but as containing that plenary substance of which there is
only one phase or facet in what is there expressed.
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¡́122 If all high things have their martyrs, Gustave Flaubert might perhaps rank
as the martyr of literary style. In his printed correspondence, a curious series
of letters, written in his twenty-fifth year, records what seems to have been
his one other passion -- a series of letters which, with its fine casuistries,
its firmly repressed anguish, its tone of harmonious grey, and the sense of
disillusion in which the whole matter ends, might have been, a few slight
changes supposed, one of his own fictions. ¡́123 Writing to Madame X. certainly
he does display, by "taking thought " mainly, by constant and delicate
pondering, as in his love for literature, a heart really moved, but still more,
and as the pledge {{Page 25}} of that emotion, a loyalty to his work. ¡́124
Madame X., too, is a literary artist, and the best gifts he can send her are
precepts of perfection in art, counsels for the effectual pursuit of that better
love. ¡́125 In his love-letters it is the pains and pleasures of art he insists
on, its solaces : he communicates secrets, reproves, encourages, with a view to
that. ¡́126 Whether the lady was dissatisfied with such divided or indirect
service, the reader is not enabled to see ; but sees that, on Flaubert's part at
least, a living person could be no rival of what was, from first to last, his
leading passion, a somewhat solitary and exclusive one.
¡́127 " I must scold you," he writes, " for one thing, which shocks, scandalises me, the small concern, namely, you show for art just now. ¡́128 As regards glory be it so : there, I approve. ¡́129 But for art ! -- the one thing in life that is good and real -- can you compare with it an earthly love ? -- prefer the adoration of a relative beauty to the cultus of the true beauty ? ¡́130 Well ! I tell you the truth. ¡́131 That is the one thing good in me: the one thing I have, to me estimable. ¡́132 For yourself, you blend with the beautiful a heap of alien things, the useful, the agreeable, what not ? --
¡́133 " The only way not to be unhappy is to shut yourself up in art, and count everything else as nothing. ¡́134 Pride takes the place of all beside when it is established on a large basis. ¡́135 Work ! God wills it. ¡́136 That, it seems to me, is clear. --
¡́137 " I am reading over again the Æneid, certain verses of which I repeat to myself to satiety. ¡́138 There are phrases there {{Page 26}} which stay in one's head, by which I find myself beset, as with those musical airs which are for ever returning, and cause you pain, you love them so much. ¡́139 I observe that I no longer laugh much, and am no longer depressed. ¡́140 I am ripe. ¡́141 You talk of my serenity, and envy me. ¡́142 It may well surprise you. ¡́143 Sick, irritated, the prey a thousand times a day of cruel pain, I continue my labour like a true working man, who, with sleeves turned up, in the sweat of his brow, beats away at his anvil, never troubling himself whether it rains or blows, for hail or thunder. ¡́144 I was not like that formerly. ¡́145 The change has taken place naturally, though my wil1 has counted for something in the matter. --
¡́146 " Those who write in good style are sometimes accused of a neglect of ideas, and of the moral end, as if the end of the physician were something else than healing, of the painter than painting -- as if the end of art were not, before all else, the beautiful."
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¡́147 What, then, did Flaubert understand by beauty, in the art he pursued with
so much fervour, with so much self-command ? ¡́148 Let us hear a sympathetic
commentator : --
¡́149 " Possessed of an absolute belief that there exists but one way of expressing one thing, one word to call it by, one adjective to qualify, one verb to animate it, he gave himself to superhuman labour for the discovery, in every phrase, of that word, that verb, that epithet. ¡́150 In this way, he believed in some mysterious harmony of expression, and when a true word seemed to him to lack euphony still went on seeking another, with invincible patience, certain that he had not yet got hold of the unique word.... ¡́151 A thousand preoccupations would beset him at the same moment, always with this desperate {{Page 27}} certitude fixed in his spirit : Among all the expressions in the world, all forms and turns of expression, there is but one -- one form, one mode -- to express what I want to say."
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¡́152 The one word for the one thing, the one thought, amid the multitude of
words, terms, that might just do : the problem of style was there ! -- the
unique word, phrase, sentence, paragraph, essay, or song, absolutely proper to
the single mental presentation or vision within. ¡́153 In that perfect justice,
over and above the many contingent and removable beauties with which beautiful
style may charm us, but which it can exist without, independent of them yet
dexterously availing itself of them, omnipresent in good work, in function at
every point, from single epithets to the rhythm of a whole book, lay the
specific, indispensable, very intellectual, beauty of literature, the
possibility of which constitutes it a fine art.
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¡́154 One seems to detect the influence of a philosophic idea there, the idea of
a natural economy, of some pre- existent adaptation, between a relative,
somewhere in the world of thought, and its correlative, somewhere in the world
of language -- both alike, rather, somewhere in the mind of the artist,
desiderative, expectant, inventive -- meeting each other with the readiness of
" soul and body reunited," in Blake's rapturous design ; and, in fact,
Flaubert was fond of giving his theory philosophical expression. --
{{Page 28}} ¡́155 " There are no beautiful thoughts," he would say, " without beautiful forms, and conversely. ¡́156 As it is impossible to extract from a physical body the qualities which really constitute it -- colour, extension, and the like -- without reducing it to a hollow abstraction, in a word, without destroying it ; just so it is impossible to detach the form from the idea, for the idea only exists by virtue of the form."
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¡́157 All the recognised flowers, the removable ornaments of literature
(including harmony and ease in reading aloud, very carefully considered by him)
counted certainly ; for these too are part of the actual value of what one says.
¡́158 But still, after all, with Flaubert, the search, the unwearied research,
was not for the smooth, or winsome, or forcible word, as such, as with false
Ciceronians, but quite simply and honestly, for the word's adjustment to its
meaning. ¡́159 The first condition of this must be, of course, to know yourself,
to have ascertained your own sense exactly. ¡́160 Then, if we suppose an artist,
he says to the reader, -- I want you to see precisely what I see. ¡́161 Into the
mind sensitive to " form," a flood of random sounds, colours,
incidents, is ever penetrating from the world without, to become, by sympathetic
selection, a part of its very structure, and, in turn, the visible vesture and
expression of that other world it sees so steadily within, nay, already with a
partial conformity thereto, to be refined, enlarged, corrected, at a hundred
points ; and it is just there, just at those doubtful {{Page 29}} points that
the function of style, as tact or taste, intervenes. ¡́162 The unique term will
come more quickly to one than another, at one time than another, according also
to the kind of matter in question. ¡́163 Quickness and slowness, ease and
closeness alike, have nothing to do with the artistic character of the true word
found at last. ¡́164 As there is a charm of ease, so there is also a special
charm in the signs of discovery, of effort and contention towards a due end, as
so often with Flaubert himself - - in the style which has been pliant, as only
obstinate, durable metal can be, to the inherent perplexities and recusancy of a
certain diffficult thought.
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¡́165 If Flaubert had not told us, perhaps we should never have guessed how
tardy and painful his own procedure really was, and after reading his confession
may think that his almost endless hesitation had much to do with diseased
nerves. ¡́166 Often, perhaps, the felicity supposed will be the product of a
happier, a more exuberant nature than Flaubert's. ¡́167 Aggravated, certainly,
by a morbid physical condition, that anxiety in " seeking the phrase,"
which gathered all the other small ennuis of a really quiet existence
into a kind of battle, was connected with his lifelong contention against facile
poetry, facile art -- art, facile and flimsy ; and what constitutes the true
artist is not the slowness or quickness of the process, but {{Page 30}} the
absolute success of the result. ¡́168 As with those labourers in the parable,
the prize is independent of the mere length of the actual day's work. ¡́169
" You talk," he writes, odd, trying lover, to Madame X. --
¡́170 " You talk of the exclusiveness of my literary tastes. ¡́171 That might have enabled you to divine what kind of a person I am in the matter of love. ¡́172 I grow so hard to please as a literary artist, that I am driven to despair. ¡́173 I shall end by not writing another line."
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¡́174 "Happy," he cries, in a moment of discouragement at that patient
labour, which for him, certainly, was the condition of a great success -- ¡́175
" Happy those who have no doubts of themselves ! who lengthen out, as the
pen runs on, all that flows forth from their brains. ¡́176 As for me, I
hesitate, I disappoint myself, turn round upon myself in despite: my taste is
augmented in proportion as my natural vigour decreases, and I afflict my soul
over some dubious word out of all proportion to the pleasure I get from a whole
page of good writing. ¡́177 One would have to live two centuries to attain a
true idea of any matter whatever. ¡́178 What Buffon said is a big blasphemy :
genius is not long- continued patience. ¡́179 Still, there is some truth in the
statement, and more than people think, especially as regards our own day. ¡́180
Art ! art ! art ! bitter deception ! phantom that glows with light, only to lead
one on to destruction."
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¡́181 Again --
¡́182 " I am growing so peevish about my writing. ¡́183 I am like a man whose ear is true but who plays falsely on the violin : his fingers refuse to reproduce precisely those sounds of which he {{Page 31}} has the inward sense. ¡́184 Then the tears come rolling down from the poor scraper's eyes and the bow falls from his hand."
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¡́185 Coming slowly or quickly, when it comes, as it came with so much labour of
mind, but also with so much lustre, to Gustave Flaubert, this discovery of the
word will be, like all artistic success and felicity, incapable of strict
analysis : effect of an intuitive condition of mind, it must be recognised by
like intuition on the part of the reader, and a sort of immediate sense. ¡́186
In every one of those masterly sentences of Flaubert there was, below all mere
contrivance, shaping and afterthought, by some happy instantaneous concourse of
the various faculties of the mind with each other, the exact apprehension of
what was needed to carry the meaning. ¡́187 And that it fits with
absolute justice will be a judgment of immediate sense in the appreciative
reader. ¡́188 We all feel this in what may be called inspired translation. ¡́189
Well ! all language involves translation from inward to outward. ¡́190 In
literature, as in all forms of art, there are the absolute and the merely
relative or accessory beauties ; and precisely in that exact proportion of the
term to its purpose is the absolute beauty of style, prose or verse. ¡́191 All
the good qualities, the beauties, of verse also, are such, only as precise
expression.
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¡́192 In the highest as in the lowliest literature, then, the {{Page 32}} one
indispensable beauty is, after all, truth : -- truth to bare fact in the latter,
as to some personal sense of fact, diverted somewhat from men's ordinary sense
of it, in the former ; truth there as accuracy, truth here as expression, that
finest and most intimate form of truth, the vraie v¨¦rit¨¦. ¡́193 And
what an eclectic principle this really is ! employing for its one sole purpose
-- that absolute accordance of expression to idea -- all other literary beauties
and excellences whatever : how many kinds of style it covers, explains,
justifies, and at the same time safeguards ! ¡́194 Scott's facility, Flaubert's
deeply pondered evocation of "the phrase," are equally good art. ¡́195
Say what you have to say, what you have a will to say, in the simplest, the most
direct and exact manner possible, with no surplusage : -- there, is the
justification of the sentence so fortunately born, "entire, smooth, and
round," that it needs no punctuation, and also (that is the point !) of the
most elaborate period, if it be right in its elaboration. ¡́196 Here is the
office of ornament : here also the purpose of restraint in ornament. ¡́197 As
the exponent of truth, that austerity (the beauty, the function, of which in
literature Flaubert understood so well) becomes not the correctness or purism of
the mere scholar, but a security against the otiose, a jealous exclusion of what
does not really tell towards the pursuit of relief, of life and vigour in the
portraiture of one's sense. {{Page 33}} ¡́198 License again, the making free
with rule, if it be indeed, as people fancy, a habit of genius, flinging aside
or transforming all that opposes the liberty of beautiful production, will be
but faith to one's own meaning. ¡́199 The seeming baldness of Le Rouge et Le
Noir is nothing in itself ; the wild ornament of Les Mis¨¦rables is
nothing in itself ; and the restraint of Flaubert, amid a real natural opulence,
only redoubled beauty -- the phrase so large and so precise at the same time,
hard as bronze, in service to the more perfect adaptation of words to their
matter. ¡́200 Afterthoughts, retouchings, finish, will be of profit only so far
as they too really serve to bring out the original, initiative, generative,
sense in them.
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¡́201 In this way, according to the well-known saying, " The style is the
man," complex or simple, in his individuality, his plenary sense of what he
really has to say, his sense of the world ; all cautions regarding style arising
out of so many natural scruples as to the medium through which alone he can
expose that inward sense of things, the purity of this medium, its laws or
tricks of refraction : nothing is to be left there which might give conveyance
to any matter save that. ¡́202 Style in all its varieties, reserved or opulent,
terse, abundant, musical, stimulant, academic, so long as each is really
characteristic or expressive, finds thus its justification, the sumptuous good
taste of Cicero {{Page 34}} being as truly the man himself, and not another,
justified, yet insured inalienably to him, thereby, as would have been his
portrait by Raffaelle, in full consular splendour, on his ivory chair.
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¡́203 A relegation, you may say perhaps -- a relegation of style to the
subjectivity, the mere caprice, of the individual, which must soon transform it
into mannerism. ¡́204 Not so ! since there is, under the conditions supposed,
for those elements of the man, for every lineament of the vision within, the one
word, the one acceptable word, recognisable by the sensitive, by others "
who have intelligence " in the matter, as absolutely as ever anything can
be in the evanescent and delicate region of human language. ¡́205 The style, the
manner, would be the man, not in his unreasoned and really uncharacteristic
caprices, involuntary or affected, but in absolutely sincere apprehension of
what is most real to him. ¡́206 But let us hear our French guide again. --
¡́207 "Styles," says Flaubert's commentator, "Styles, as so many peculiar moulds, each of which bears the mark of a particular writer, who is to pour into it the whole content of his ideas, were no part of his theory. ¡́208 What he believed in was Style: that is to say, a certain absolute and unique manner of expressing a thing, in all its intensity and colour. ¡́209 For him the form was the work itself. ¡́210 As in living creatures, the blood, nourishing the body, determines its very contour and external aspect, just so, to his mind, the matter, the basis, in a work of art, {{Page 35}} imposed, necessarily, the unique, the just expression, the measure, the rhythm -- the form in all its characteristics."
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¡́211 If the style be the man, in all the colour and intensity of a veritable
apprehension, it will be in a real sense " impersonal."
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¡́212 I said, thinking of books like Victor Hugo's Les Mis¨¦rables, that
prose literature was the characteristic art of the nineteenth century, as
others, thinking of its triumphs since the youth of Bach, have assigned that
place to music. ¡́213 Music and prose literature are, in one sense, the opposite
terms of art ; the art of literature presenting to the imagination, through the
intelligence, a range of interests, as free and various as those which music
presents to it through sense. ¡́214 And certainly the tendency of what has been
here said is to bring literature too under those conditions, by conformity to
which music takes rank as the typically perfect art. ¡́215 If music be the ideal
of all art whatever, precisely because in music it is impossible to distinguish
the form from the substance or matter, the subject from the expression, then,
literature, by finding its specific excellence in the absolute correspondence of
the term to its import, will be but fulfilling the condition of all artistic
quality in things everywhere, of all good art.
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¡́216 Good art, but not necessarily great art ; the distinction between great
art and good art depend- {{Page 36}} ing immediately, as regards literature at
all events, not on its form, but on the matter. ¡́217 Thackeray's Esmond ,
surely, is greater art than Vanity Fair, by the greater dignity of its
interests. ¡́218 It is on the quality of the matter it informs or controls, its
compass, its variety, its alliance to great ends, or the depth of the note of
revolt, or the largeness of hope in it, that the greatness of literary art
depends, as The Divine Comedy, Paradise Lost, Les Mis¨¦rables, The English
Bible, are great art. ¡́219 Given the conditions I have tried to explain as
constituting good art ; -- then, if it be devoted further to the increase of
men's happiness, to the redemption of the oppressed, or the enlargement of our
sympathies with each other, or to such presentment of new or old truth about
ourselves and our relation to the world as may ennoble and fortify us in our
sojourn here, or immediately, as with Dante, to the glory of God, it will be
also great art ; if, over and above those qualities I summed up as mind and soul
-- that colour and mystic perfume, and that reasonable structure, it has
something of the soul of humanity in it, and finds its logical, its
architectural place, in the great structure of human life.
1888.
Copytext: Appreciations
(London: Macmillan and Co., and New York, 1890): 1-36.
Source: the same.
Ed. (text): Ian Lancashire, Rep. Criticism On-line (1996).
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